- 04 мар 2010, 01:36
#8647
Решил освежить подобную тему старого форума.
Под настроение решил выложить свой собственный креатив четырехлетней давности.
На английском не оч просто подобрать рифму было, так что получилось так как получилось. Оценивайте:
A young lonely man,
With a sad dark soul
Saw a pretty girl
And his wishes grow.
But he hadn't hopes,
Did not say a word
She ignored him,
So he stayed apart.
His hot feelings fall,
And his deep light heart
Had been crashed by her
In a thousand parts.
He met often her
As he felt her smell
And he suffered great
In this part of year
His gray eyes asked her
Her big eyes said "no",
We are only friends,
Almost nothing more.
He went to his friend,
Asked his friend for help,
His friend said to him:
"Change into yourself"
He tried change his heart
He tried change his soul
It was very hard
But he wanted more
So he locked his heart
Didn't want to show
What he felt in real...
Only metal claws
Под настроение решил выложить свой собственный креатив четырехлетней давности.
На английском не оч просто подобрать рифму было, так что получилось так как получилось. Оценивайте:
A young lonely man,
With a sad dark soul
Saw a pretty girl
And his wishes grow.
But he hadn't hopes,
Did not say a word
She ignored him,
So he stayed apart.
His hot feelings fall,
And his deep light heart
Had been crashed by her
In a thousand parts.
He met often her
As he felt her smell
And he suffered great
In this part of year
His gray eyes asked her
Her big eyes said "no",
We are only friends,
Almost nothing more.
He went to his friend,
Asked his friend for help,
His friend said to him:
"Change into yourself"
He tried change his heart
He tried change his soul
It was very hard
But he wanted more
So he locked his heart
Didn't want to show
What he felt in real...
Only metal claws
Последний раз редактировалось Dynamo-Moscow-Fan 19 фев 2011, 20:22, всего редактировалось 1 раз.